Hi argail,
that is really good pixel art u got there. I especially like it with the parallax effect. To be able to walk around the moon is an cool idea.
Here a few things I would change:
- Change volume of music/sounds. the music is a bit to loud for my taste.
- The moon, the font, the jewels and the coins doesn't fit to the pixel art. They have to many details. Especially the jewel is to 3d-ish.
- Collected jewels/coins fall somewhere down. That was a bit confusing like what is it going to do down there. I would just let it pop up a bit and dissapear or if you like it flying I would recommend to let it fly to the counter in the top left (like donkey kong country does it with bananas ^^)
- Lifebar could be bigger
- You should make it more clear when the player got hit. Maybe the sound could fix it or you let him bleed or flash or something.
- Moving objects should look diffrent to solid rocks.
Hope this feedback helps you. I am curious about your boss.
Cheers,
Marco
- Change volume of music/sounds. the music is a bit to loud for my taste.
- Yeah, the sounds were taken around the internet and they aren't normalized!
- The moon, the font, the jewels and the coins doesn't fit to the pixel art. They have to many details. Especially the jewel is to 3d-ish.
- This is true! Of course i must change all the graphics due the copyright.....
- Collected jewels/coins fall somewhere down. That was a bit confusing like what is it going to do down there. I would just let it pop up a bit and dissapear or if you like it flying I would recommend to let it fly to the counter in the top left (like donkey kong country does it with bananas ^^)
- i work hard to get this effect that i like so much!
- Yes, it's very small!!! Maybe i will change the life bar with something like the original Wonderboy, so with heart!
- You should make it more clear when the player got hit. Maybe the sound could fix it or you let him bleed or flash or something.
- This was made a long time ago, now that I have more experience with Constructor2 i will change it, fixing the animations and the sounds.
- Moving objects should look diffrent to solid rocks.
- I don't understand what yo mean......