Dream Journey (platform)

http://dreamjourney.hol.es/

Hi everyone!

This is a platform like Wonderboy!

It's playable a small part of the first level..... now i'm working to the first level Boss, but i don't know where to start! <img src="{SMILIES_PATH}/icon_e_biggrin.gif" alt=":D" title="Very Happy">

http://dreamjourney.hol.es/

Nice graphics and smooth gameplay. All I can say for your end boss it make it HUGE, BIG with lots of shooting guns

Hi argail,

that is really good pixel art u got there. I especially like it with the parallax effect. To be able to walk around the moon is an cool idea.

Here a few things I would change:

• Change volume of music/sounds. the music is a bit to loud for my taste.
• The moon, the font, the jewels and the coins doesn't fit to the pixel art. They have to many details. Especially the jewel is to 3d-ish.
• Collected jewels/coins fall somewhere down. That was a bit confusing like what is it going to do down there. I would just let it pop up a bit and dissapear or if you like it flying I would recommend to let it fly to the counter in the top left (like donkey kong country does it with bananas ^^)
• Lifebar could be bigger
• You should make it more clear when the player got hit. Maybe the sound could fix it or you let him bleed or flash or something.
• Moving objects should look diffrent to solid rocks.

Hope this feedback helps you. I am curious about your boss.

Cheers,

Marco

Hi argail,

that is really good pixel art u got there. I especially like it with the parallax effect. To be able to walk around the moon is an cool idea.

Here a few things I would change:

- Change volume of music/sounds. the music is a bit to loud for my taste.

- The moon, the font, the jewels and the coins doesn't fit to the pixel art. They have to many details. Especially the jewel is to 3d-ish.

- Collected jewels/coins fall somewhere down. That was a bit confusing like what is it going to do down there. I would just let it pop up a bit and dissapear or if you like it flying I would recommend to let it fly to the counter in the top left (like donkey kong country does it with bananas ^^)

- Lifebar could be bigger

- You should make it more clear when the player got hit. Maybe the sound could fix it or you let him bleed or flash or something.

- Moving objects should look diffrent to solid rocks.

Hope this feedback helps you. I am curious about your boss.

Cheers,

Marco

• Change volume of music/sounds. the music is a bit to loud for my taste.

- Yeah, the sounds were taken around the internet and they aren't normalized!

• The moon, the font, the jewels and the coins doesn't fit to the pixel art. They have to many details. Especially the jewel is to 3d-ish.

- This is true! Of course i must change all the graphics due the copyright.....

• Collected jewels/coins fall somewhere down. That was a bit confusing like what is it going to do down there. I would just let it pop up a bit and dissapear or if you like it flying I would recommend to let it fly to the counter in the top left (like donkey kong country does it with bananas ^^)

- i work hard to get this effect that i like so much!

• Lifebar could be bigger

- Yes, it's very small!!! Maybe i will change the life bar with something like the original Wonderboy, so with heart!

• You should make it more clear when the player got hit. Maybe the sound could fix it or you let him bleed or flash or something.

- This was made a long time ago, now that I have more experience with Constructor2 i will change it, fixing the animations and the sounds.

• Moving objects should look diffrent to solid rocks.

- I don't understand what yo mean......

Hi it is great game keep improving I am making platformer too and I want to ask you what condition do you use for walk sound of character? Thank you for share.

Hi it is great game keep improving I am making platformer too and I want to ask you what condition do you use for walk sound of character? Thank you for share.

Hi friend!! This is the part regarding the walking sound fx.... i don't know if there's a best way to do this, but in this way it works!

Global variable : passi = 0 (passi means steps)

Animation "spadadx" and "spadasx" are the animations of the sword on the left and the right side.

Stopmuro is a global variable that check if the player is near a wall or not.

Pgmorto is a global variable that check if the player is dead or not.

Thank you for sharing it is interesting system I will try it and compere with other one.

Here is my version (inspired by example project Neon-platformer).

Here is my version (inspired by example project Neon-platformer).

Cool! Do you have a demo to test ?

Build 0.004

Added the possibility to shoot arrows.

Addes boss (beta).

(shoot or hit the head of the minotaur)

Very smooth so far, keep it up and looking forward to an awesome retro game!

Very smooth so far, keep it up and looking forward to an awesome retro game!

Thanks man!!

It's so hard because i'm alone! I need a graphics designer because the graphics that i'm using is copyrighted!

I self taught graphics design and animation. When you're a broke indie dev, you have to do it all.

I think this is awesome! You should definately work into better spritefonts, though. It's nice as hard as you believe, trust me, spritefonts will lift this game great heights. I hope you continue working on this. Great!

I think this is awesome! You should definately work into better spritefonts, though. It's nice as hard as you believe, trust me, spritefonts will lift this game great heights. I hope you continue working on this. Great!

Thank you very much!!

I don't know if choose serious characters or follow this kind of characters like the wonderboy's sprites.

Any advices ?