I really like the simplicity of the artwork -- I don't mean that it in a bad way. I just mean that it reads really well and there are nice gradients within the art.

That looks really good! Congrats!

I remember that game from the Atari 2600! Congrats on how far along you are on your game.

It looks really nice! Good luck with your kickstarter. I know kickstarters can be hard to get funding for.

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> > Not the same as per your link, but here is my feedback based on pics here.

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> > I like what you have, one small suggestion, the leaves overlay at the bottom and sides of the screen is distracting it takes away from your toon. The leaves at the top is nice but where it merges in the center looks not so nice. I'd make one solid strip, or a tiled strip with no visible join area.

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> > Other than that hat off, you rock!

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> Yes, it looks very nice, and I agree from an art-perspective that leaves in the very foreground are distracting with what is in the game (partially because they are the same color). If you really want them in there I think it would look better if they were much, much darker almost forming more of a dark silhouette. But otherwise good job!

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The leaves were a later addition actually. I wanted to give the impression as if we were looking through a window or some sort of frame. I suppose they did came out a bit distracting.

Thank a lot for your comments, I'm not a graphic designer, so these tips are really helpfull.

Actually I don't think the leaves being a frame is a bad idea at all. The game "Treasurenauts" did the same concept, but notice how they are darkened as silhouettes. See the attached image:[attachment=0:s9jop2jc][/attachment:s9jop2jc]

Very well done. Great animation. I love how the white windows contrast so well with the interior.

This is looking really cool! I agree that it has captured the old snes feeling.

Cool video, it was nice seeing it in action!

Very very nice!

Not the same as per your link, but here is my feedback based on pics here.

I like what you have, one small suggestion, the leaves overlay at the bottom and sides of the screen is distracting it takes away from your toon. The leaves at the top is nice but where it merges in the center looks not so nice. I'd make one solid strip, or a tiled strip with no visible join area.

Other than that hat off, you rock!

Yes, it looks very nice, and I agree from an art-perspective that leaves in the very foreground are distracting with what is in the game (partially because they are the same color). If you really want them in there I think it would look better if they were much, much darker almost forming more of a dark silhouette. But otherwise good job!

The game has a cartoon-stylized look to it that is really appealing -- kind of like the show Ren and Stimpy in a way. Cool!

That looks really cool, and I think the art style looks really nice! Looking forward to trying this.

Hey, congrats on making your first game. I'm still trying to get mine finished up.

It looks almost like a pinball game. Am I correct?