Overall I think your informaiton layering is good, but it looks more fantasy than steampunk. You could replace the HP/MP bars with pistons, sliders with springs, liquids, steam...
Check Victorian Art and Art Nouveau's style to inspire you (bioshock series HUD as well, I remember they used something like that)
<img src="http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2013/107/a/a/steampunk_motherboard_by_derekprospero-d623asm.jpg" border="0" />