Gun Peeps: Shooter in the throes of completion

Hi guys! I'm making a shooter and I'm looking for some feedback and suggestions. Specifically what you liked and disliked about playing would be particularly helpful. Also and bugs found and what browser you are using would be good information.

You can play it here!

http://www.newgrounds.com/portal/view/641129

Edit: Thanks for the feedback everyone! The game is now complete and fully playable. Give it a shot!

Hey, I tried it and so far it's looking great. Personally I would make the story shorter using just key sentences that gives a good idea. Also maybe having a notice reminding the Player that after the story is done they can begin the first level would be cool.

Gameplay wise it's quite cool. I loved the target system. Hope to see more updates!

Cheers

I think it's great. I loved the story, just maybe, pressing mouse button could make it go faster. And as Fraktal says, an indication that says it ended.

Gameplay is nice, wonderfull even. Very little but nice touches all around. Definately love it and would like to see more. Music, graphics, mechanics everything just fits and polished. Well done.

Thanks a lot guys!

I wouldn't consider the game quite polished yet but it's still getting features and levels added, as well as other usability things.

I will definitely work on the introduction cutscene a bit more and take your suggestions into consideration.

Hi Sushin, I tried it on a tablet but the controls are obviously for desktop/laptop. Still I got to the story with taps It wouldn't let me past that (even after the story rolled out).

Could you please tell me which ads did you use? They displayed just fine on an android tablet.

Hi Sushin, I tried it on a tablet but the controls are obviously for desktop/laptop. Still I got to the story with taps It wouldn't let me past that (even after the story rolled out).

Could you please tell me which ads did you use? They displayed just fine on an android tablet.

Thanks! Unfortunately the controls are only mouse and keyboard so it would be very difficult or impossible to play on a tablet or phone, but I am considering adding controller support before it's finished.

I used Clay.io for the advertisement on the loading screen. It has a very nice plugin for Construct 2.

Absolutly nice game. I like the scnerio and game play.