I'm posting a game I created ages ago to seek feedback on how it can be improved.

It's a very simple game, just chop the oncoming lumber whilst avoiding the bombs. If you chop a lumber piece near the centre of the.. thing (don't know what to call it exactly), you will gain 2 points instead of 1.

A fair amount of people have played it, some liked it and others didn't. The most common responses I got were:

• The speed of the objects progresses too fast. (Easily fixable)
• You can't really tell when the log is close to the centre to get double points. (Might just remove this feature)
• There isn't much to it.

I am considering revamping the game and I already have ideas on how to improve it that would work quite well, but a clearer picture on the games faults is needed (besides the ones mentioned above). So if you could quickly play the game and share your thoughts, that would be greatly appreciated. Be honest.

The game was only made in a few days. Not much effort was put into it.

Game Link: http://chopjackpreview.bitballoon.com/

Controls: Tap or use arrow keys (use both at the same time to chop both sides.

And here's a screenshot:

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Does this work with cordova (crosswalk and phonegap) too?

Thank you for the comments

bilgekaan I assure you there is enough time to dodge the rocks. There's just a slight learning curve to it

Can a mod or admin please delete this thread?

Thank you.

All you need to do is upload screenshots for 10 inch tablets (I don't think you need 7 inch, but do it anyway) and the message will go away. You don't need to create new screenshots, you can simply reuse the ones you made for phones.

The play store link is always "https://play.google.com/store/apps/details?id=" followed by the package name/ID of the app (e.g. com.android.chrome).

You have to open the image editor first, then click on the animation and it'll show up in the properties menu.

I couldn't stop laughing at the guy waving.

Anyway, you should create a family for the enemies with an instance variable for HP. Then add the archer and swordsman sprites to the family so that you only need to use one event for checking if an enemy is being attacked or has lost all their health. This will make your life a whole lot easier as you begin adding more enemies.

Also, try and make use of functions, a game like this will benefit massively from it. It also helps organise your "code" a bit.

I've made two games with pixel art so far and decided to try a different style this time round. In this game, you must protect the minecart (it's more difficult than it sounds).

Looks a bit plain at the moment, it's still a work in progress. If anyone has an idea of what I can add/remove from the background/cave, please let me know .

Criticism is welcome.

Oh, I forgot to put square brackets around my array values. Silly me, it works now.

I'm actually having this exact problem. I'm trying to add skins(costumes) using a JSON file which contains the ID, name and price of each skin. Every time I try and get a value from the Y column using an X value I always get a 0.

It's weird because I can get values from column 1 (which contains the name) of the array, but columns 0 and 2 always returns a 0. I'm not sure if it has something to do with it being a string.

It isn't actually, at least that was not my intention. Though I now realise the screenshots come across this way...