I like the idea here. How far will you go with it? Will it be 'complete enough quests to get 10k' or will it become more of a narrative rpg with some sinister plot with conspiracies all over the place.
In this early version I didn't like how you explode when you touch the planet. I assumed I would be able to fly over that since obviously my ship isn't actually the size of a large country sitting right next to the surface of the planet. A little clarity as to what is in play and what might be background. A spaceship movement system would be nice too.
Would be good to know what you plan to do next.