Not too bad, Darklad, but it needs more info.
For example, the ladders section simply tells you to look at what you did in the editor without explaining much. I think you should explain what each event in there does, particularly what the event set climb to 2 is for.
Same with the swimming section. It's functional in the demo, and you can see how you did it in the editor, but it's not explained very well at all. Again, I think a step by step process is needed here to say what each few subgroups of events do.
The enemy section is slightly better, but still not enough info. You should really reference which number events you're talking about, and direct people on which sections to go into in the editor.
If you fix these things, you'll be picking up right where the first five left off and it will be a great help to all the noobs like me!