Have fun experimenting. The thing about flow of consciousness that I have learned and am still learning is... It can be quite fun! It's great to give your mind a starting point and all your electrodes start firing and chipping in ideas for this and that. You'll be amazed at the traversal once you stop and look back a bit. The problem is
Well, our own mind has a lot of things solved and connects them for us if we let it.We can go from point A to point rectangle in a few bats of a lash and not question much, just keep jumping through the hoops. Other people, that is anyone who is not "you" sometimes need those missing steps or at least the top and tail ends of your ideas shaved down into little ramps so they can enjoy the ride with you. Basically, if you are inviting a group on a flight of fancy with you, give them wings and some feedback from time to time to help steer them or to help them steer.
I like some of the elements going on here, and maybe you're just braindropping everything that you can while learning the program but I don't get why I'm doing anything here. I'm in an obscured platformer, with a weapon to shoot people who make me flash otherwise, can get hugs from pink things, will have to time jumps to meet moving platforms, to collect yellow gems but if I walk a certain way I can see the first page of an illustrative gazette. i feel like I've both seen everything and missed everything entirely at the same time.
I'm not saying you should put more notes around the place that explicitly tells people whats going on, but to think of more ways to explain what might be going on with the play mechanics.