You would use "Score: "&Score&"/30" to make it look like Score: 12/30.
Your conditions would be just what you put in 2. System condition to check value of score, if =<19 set text to "Fair/"&Score&"/30", if <30 but =>20 (two conditions) set text to "Good/"&Score&"/30" and if =30 set text to "Perfect/"&Score&"/30"