Thanks guys! I'm working hard to promote the project to the press right now, so fingers crossed we get some coverage. Any help with spreading the word would be awesome.

I've included the Scirra logo in Omega's startup splash screens, and I'm planning to make one of the updates for Omega discuss just how awesome Construct is - both as an engine and a community. I want this to be a great thing for Scirra as well as Omega <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

Hey guys!

Omega is now live on Kickstarter, with a playable demo/concept, a video dedicated entirely to gameplay, and loads of screenshots and concept art! It's taken a while to reach this stage, but now that the framework is laid out I'll be able to tweak, polish, and then keep building content if the crowd-funding drive is successful!

Whether you back the project or not, I'd still love to hear feedback from you. This is very much a work in progress, and although I've already still got a lot left to implement from the beta testing feedback I received, every little helps (especially when it comes from aspiring developers)!

Thanks to everyone has provided feedback, advice, assistance, and alpha/beta tested the playable concept. I tried to include all of you in the credits of the demo <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle"> Also, a special thanks to Tulamide, who has been like a mentor to me and even created the music! Thanks, man!

Omega on Kickstarter

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Omega now has a new version up for Beta testing in this thread: http://www.scirra.com/forum/topic60794.html

If you have 10 minutes to spare, I'd really appreciate your opinions! Thanks <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle">

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New Beta version uploaded! Check the OP for updated download links <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

<font size="5">Patch Notes:</font>

You can choose which Controls to use! WASD, or two different Arrow Key set ups! Check the Options menu to select them.

The Boar and Stag now have two new animations each. An idle, and a new situational attack.

The Boar will smash against cliffs to knock you (and any unfortunate spiders!) off of them if you are nearby. He also starts off running slower than before, but constantly accelerates until he is moving like a freight train. No more escaping him!

The Stag chases you down much more efficiently now. I've completely re-written his events, and optimized him in the process. He'll charge you down all the way to the cave entrance, and even smash into it if you make a narrow escape!

Spiders no longer overlap each other, and now shoot webbing. The webbing will impede your jumps if they hit you in mid-air, or stick you to the ground if you aren't. When you're stuck, mash the jump button to escape, or use an elemental ability.

Branch detection has been improved, and jumping altered slightly. Hopefully it's a little easier now, but some jumps are deliberately difficult to make (that's what the Wind Dash ability is for!) <img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

Roots now break after 20 seconds for Spiders, 10 seconds for Boars.

Leaves blowing through the air have been added to various different places across the forest.

Swaying vines with flowers have been added all across the map for more movement and colour. Red flowers have been added to the base of the unique tree.

Bug where one of the checkpoints left the Wolf floating in the air has been fixed.

Thorns should now be more accurate with their detection and damage, but I'm pretty sure this is still not quite fixed. It's definitely improved though.

<font size="5">Final Words:</font>

There's a lot more I want to add after Christmas, including animated birds and shadows for the wolf, boar, and stag. I'm also going to work on a tutorial to explain the elemental abilities and how to use them, and I'm going to add a load more medals (close to double what the game already has). Medals are there to reward the player for playing how THEY want to play, and to ensure all playstyles are balanced. If you aren't bothered about High Scores, they probably won't mean much to you, and that's fine too <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

Thanks for playing, and have a good Christmas!

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Cool game, Silver. I like the animation for the wolf and the art style. There are a few suggestions that could be made to improve the game.

- At first I didn't realize that the red bushes would do damage to the wolf. So making them look more dangerous could possibly help.

- I ran into one glitch after I died that had the wolf hovering above the checkpoint for about 20 seconds.

- While the first level wasn't difficult. The difficulty curve is too high for inexperienced gamers.

- Adding a idle animation to the wolf would bring much more life to the character.

- Adding a life bar or a hurt animation will remind the player how much life they have.

- Adding a hit animation when the player is hit or hurt will help.

- Adding a death animation can also help.

Good luck with your game.

Thanks, TunaUppercut!

• I'll tweak the thorn bushes some more. Make them more spiky, and more red!

• The floating respawn glitch should now be fixed in the latest version (just uploaded). Thanks for reporting it though <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

• It is a difficult curve, yes. This is the third level in the game rather than the first. The first will be a tutorial, the second an easy platforming level, and this third level is where the difficulty starts to build up. I realize that's going to cause some issues, so I've decided to build in a quick tutorial level for future updates that will trigger the first time you start a new game - explaining the elements, the basics of platforming in the game.

• I agree, an idle for the wolf would be awesome! It's something I definitely want to add, but I feel there are higher priorities right now. I promise I'll get around to it eventually though <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

• Regarding life bars - I want to stick to one energy bar for simplicity. I think the issue some people are having is thinking of spending energy as spending "life", which I can understand. But a single hit will deplete your energy to zero no matter what - whilst spending that energy on, say, the Water skill to shield yourself with ice spikes will only cost you 20 out of your 100 energy, and will prevent you from losing more. Energy is really plentiful, and you should rarely ever find yourself without it and desperately searching for more. The idea is to keep the UI simple and streamlined, and to encourage the use of elements by making energy so abundant.

Adding a healthbar would not only lower the importance of the Water skill (or render it almost useless) but I'd then have to add items that boost your health throughout the game as well. I'd rather keep it simple, and just add a tutorial that explains how energy and elements work.

• There should be a hit animation when the player is hurt (more-or-less). He'll flash and be thrown backwards. I definitely want to improve this though, especially in regards to the death animation, which is just a black transition.

Thanks again for the feedback! I'll be using it to improve Omega as soon as I'm back from the Christmas holidays!

That's excellent, Shadowlord! Great thinking <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

Just had a thought here. This isn't a perfect solution, but it adds some randomization between different enemies - since your enemies already exist on the layout (I'm assuming you aren't getting the System to create them at run time?) you could set some private variables up for them individually. So for example, give them all a private variable called 'Shoot' and manually set each Enemy's 'Shoot' value to a different number.

For Each Enemy --->

          Every 50+Enemy('Shoot')milliseconds ---> System: Create object bullet at Enemy.X, .Y

I haven't tested this, but I think it should work. So an enemy with a 'Shoot' value of 0 would fire every half a second, whilst an enemy with a value of 150 would shoot every 2 seconds.

I'd be interested to know about this too, since I tried generating wind effects with random spawn times. I gave the Wind object a private variable named "spawn", and set the event up like this:

Every 2000+Wind('spawn') milliseconds ---> Wind: Set 'spawn' to random(5000)

                                                                      System: Create object "Wind" at position X,Y

But it didn't work :( It calculated the random figure for 'spawn' once, and then stuck to that figure for the entire playthrough. Different spawn speed for each playthrough, mind you, so it sort of worked, slightly.

I'm not sure why that doesn't work though. If it did, I imagine your shooting behaviour could work with a similar setup.

<font size="5">Ideas for Improvements</font>

Thanks for all the detailed feedback so far! I'll make a summary of the improvements you guys have recommended, and thoughts I have for tweaking the game further, and I'd love to hear back from you on them. Also, go ahead and make more suggestions of your own if you have them!

Background/Colour:

Here you go:

<img src="http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc212/darkstorne/OmegaForest2.png" border="0" />

Looking better? I'll add a gif at the bottom of this post switching between the old and the new <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" /> I boosted the foreground contrast a little, and lowered the contrast of the backgrounds while pushing them further towards a blue hue. Is there anything else I should do to tweak the colours? I'm also thinking of blurring the mountains a little, but as Crowtongue mentioned the detail probably helps them - especially the big mountain. So I'm not sure about that.

Environmental Life

Clearly, the issue with having a detailed wolf is that everything else looks stark in comparison. I have swaying ferns in the version you're playing, but I've now added back in (I removed it for potential performance boosts) swaying thorns. I'm now thinking of adding more life and movement to the scene through:

1) Flocks of birds - should be easy to do, flying across the backgrounds <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

2) More mists - rolling across the forest in the distance, not just along the base of the mountains.

3) More leaves - blowing through the air, like in the above screenshot. I can have these at various places in the level, it's easy to do, so it's a no-brainer really.

4) Critters in the forest - I could have birds flitting through the trees, squirrels scurrying up trunks, and fish in the pools. I'm not sure how much work these will be, since foreground work requires a lot more detail, and animations are by FAR the most time-consuming aspect of this game. Please let me know which ideas you like most, and if you have suggestions of your own for adding more environmental life. Perhaps plant life? That could add to the colour variety as well.

Enemies

These tie into environmental life as well, since giving them more animations will not just help make them feel more alive, but give an illusion of better AI as well.

I definitely want to add spiders that shoot web, as Crowtongue suggested, and I'm thinking of making them trap the wolf instead of damage him. Spiders are there as more of a nuisance than a real threat. Being trapped could lead to the player having to mash the movement keys to escape - faster presses lead to a faster escape. And if you don't escape, the spider will walk up to you and bite you! Or a boar or stag will trample you if you're in the wrong place at the wrong time <img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

As for the Stag, he definitely needs some more animations, and I'll try to make him charge you down some more. The issue here is that he takes a lot of work to animate well (I'm still not happy with the current animations for him) so I could easily spend an entire day just adding one more animation to his repertoire. I think it's worth it though. I've been tempted for a long time to give him a harem (group of females) that will run away from the wolf when he approaches. It would look wonderful and add to that environmental life factor, but man... the work involved for something that's essentially just a pleasant visual moment is pretty extreme <img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0" align="middle" /> Let me know what you think though. It might be worth it.

For the boar, I want him to do something when you're on a low ledge and he's right below you. Maybe smash into the ledge and knock you down? I think that can be done, and it's a short and simple animation to introduce.

Gameplay

None of you mentioned the medals, so I'm guessing they aren't prominent enough <img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0" align="middle" /> I really want to make these a centerpiece, since they should place an emphasis on points over time. Those points can be scored for various actions (including fast times, if you want to focus on that) and allow for different playstyles to be rewarded in their own way. So using fire loads will likely award you a medal for killing enemies with fire many times, and a medal for killing one of each enemy. You're also accumulating points for every enemy you kill during gameplay. Conversely, you can get medals for not dying, not taking any damage, and even for not killing any enemies, so evasive playstyles are rewarded just as much. Speed awards time bonus medals, and there are medals for strategic playstyles - rooting three enemies at once, getting one enemy to kill another (try making a boar or stag charge down a spider! To make this easier, I'll allow all spiders to drop down from their ledges) etc.

If you can think of other cool ideas for medal rewards, please let me know! I'm going to add as many as I can. I want it to be fun trying to get a new high score, by experimenting with various elements and playstyles.

PixelPerfick mentioned that he enjoys this game the most when he's zipping around on the branches, so I'm thinking about speeding the game up a bit. I've been worried for a while that the pace feels a little sluggish, but no-one else mentioned it. Do you think faster running, jumping, and falling speeds would be a good idea? Or do you like the current pace?

Gif comparison of background alterations:

<img src="http://i216.photobucket.com/albums/cc212/darkstorne/OmegaForest-1.gif" border="0" />

If you have any other suggestions, please feel free to fire them away, no matter how scathing they might be! I'm determined to make the best game I possibly can (though being a one-man band who sucks at programming imposes quite a few restrictions there <img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0" align="middle" />), and your feedback will only help me evolve Omega into something better.

So far I've altered the background colours and, most importantly, thanks to the help of MrMiller I've implemented the Controls option in the Options menu - so it's now possible to play with the current arrow keys setup, the arrow keys with space as the jump button, or WASD movement with the arrow keys for abilities (my preferred method). I'll wait for some more feedback and make some more improvements before uploading a new version.

Thanks so much for your time <img src="smileys/smiley12.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

And thanks again to MrMiller for the Controls additions, and most of all to Tulamide: without him, my wolf would have no music to run along to, and I would still be stuck trying to work out how to handle angle detection <img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

THANK YOU, TULAMIDE! (I know you're there!)

Silver...I am feeling this game!..which I think is what you want the player to do?...there is an instant sense of excited adventure portrayed in the character your art and your animation...all good...I really want to love this game,as it's apparent the effort that has been poured into it.

But,and it's a big but,this sense of wild enthusiasm is stifled by awkward platforming,that detracts rather than enhances...good news!,it's fixable...

Let me elaborate,I'm a seasoned gamer and struggled on certain sections,due to wobbly transitions and iffy collision detection on the angled branches...I can almost forgive.

On the other hand my girlfriend,who I think would be nearer to your target audience,instantly fell for the look of the game and wanted to play...15 mins later,She could not get beyond the first few branches!!

Only my opinion but I would add some freedom and pace,I'm having more fun just running though trees,using my wolflike speed and guile to avoid hazards.rather than bouncing on their heads!

I don't want to sound critical,far from it I want your game to be as brilliant as your imagination...changes I'd advise...

Straight branches keep the pace up (zig zag up to prolong level)

Have more enemies to avoid rather than kill (more natural for a wolf)

A sneak function that would open a new tier of gameplay and avoid bounding off where it's not needed.(creep past that angry boar unnoticed)

Just to add,the game ran flawlessly at 1024x765 on my amd athlon 2.8MHZ

with 256 meg video card...no bugs noticed.

Better go now,My girlfriend wants another go....lol.

As I said there is a great game in here,just waiting to be released!

Thanks for playing PixelPerfick and PixelPerfick's girlfriend! Her suffering will not be in vain!

I love running through the trees too! Though I'm not sure why you're getting detection issues... could you elaborate please? I'm worried it's to do with the resolution (I'm assuming you used 1024x768?) because although I supported it for being a common resolution on older monitors, I never actually tested that one myself - only went down to 1280x720. Of course, it could also be that the collision and angle detection just kinda sucks, and I'm so used to it I no longer notice <img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0" align="middle" /> If you could elaborate that would be awesome.

I think you're right about adding pace. I'm tempted to speed the game up a bit, because when you move up in resolution especially the game appears to move slower as a result of seeing more screen space around the wolf. As for the branches, I built them sloping because a) it looked a little more natural than straight, and b) it works as a compromise to taking the more direct, but more obstacle and enemy-littered, low path.

As for avoiding enemies, keep it up! There's a medal for getting through the game with a big point bonus for not killing any enemies. I'm a little worried medals aren't prolific enough, since no-one has mentioned them. I may add a load more for smaller rewards (maybe such as killing no more than three enemies, for a smaller point bonus than the Pacifist Medal awarded for not killing any at all). The idea of the medal and high score system was to place an emphasis on points instead of time - encouraging that freedom you're after. So although there are medals for fast times, you can easily take your time exploring and experimenting with the elements, earning medal rewards for loads of other actions. I'll definitely add more medals to encourage exploration though <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

A sneak function is actually a really cool idea. I may build that in as a Wind or Water ability, temporarily cloaking the wolf in mists so he can sneak past enemies undetected at the cost of reduced movement speed. Great idea! <img src="smileys/smiley20.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

Thanks again for your feedback, Pixel! If you have the time, please read on below where I'll make a post about suggested improvements. I'd love to get your thoughts on them <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

Looks like you've done a lot since we last got a play. The waterfalls are much nicer, running along the branches is much improved, the boar has been implemented, looks great!

Having read that you're going to try and get a kickstarter going though, I would be super picky about getting this ready.

- Title screen, the fonts are a bit bland here. I would spruce them up a bit or make a custom font.

- Title screen, this would be very nice if you animated it I think. Like some sort of breeze pushing around a layer of grass and the wolfs hair. Something like that.

- Background - It was on the tip of my tongue but I didn't quite realize it until Rory pointed it out... Something to add more depth would make the entire game look a lot better. I would personally suggest the color desaturation route, as I think the graphics in the background are wonderful and wouldn't want to blur them.

-Gameplay - Dying - Death seems a bit weird sometimes. First of all if you entangle some enemies with your skill, then die, they will still be like t hat. If you die after running over the wooden planks they will still all be collapsed when you respawn. Sometimes when you fall on a bramble bush from above you are screwed, you take one hit immediately, and when you move you take another right away too and die. This seems to be easier to avoid when running into them from the side.

I have encountered a strange bug I haven't been able to replicate where before respawning the wolf will float in the air and everything will shake.

-Graphics - edge of waterfall pond - these ponds just abruptly end in a square shape. I'd make a transition.

= Enemy AI - Although you put such care into animating the enemies they feel like kind of an afterthought while playing the game. When the giant horned deer enemy runs past you, he doesn't come back to chase you. Spiders always stay on whatever surface they are on. The boar simply charges back and forth kind of slowly. There is no challenge here, and no reason to really want to kill the enemies. It's not a fun part of the game, doesn't give you anything, and they are pretty easy to dodge. So why not just avoid them?

Give them special attacks they can do sometimes! If a spider can't follow you anymore, maybe it can shoot webs at you from wherever it's stopped.

Maybe a boar can charge up and do a really fast charge, and when he hits something if you're close it will stun you.

Maybe the giant deer can jump around and follow you.

I realize all of those things are a lot of work, but trust me it will improve your game so much.

Anyways, your game has really come along and it it's super impressive. It's inspiring to me as I struggle to work on my own things in Construct. Great job and I really hope to see more soon!

Hey Crowtongue, thanks for stopping by! Please do be super-picky: every criticism helps me improve, so don't hold back <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

Title Screen - I agree about the font, it was the stock font that came with Construct as standard, and I haven't given it any thought yet at all (other than the logo font, of course - is the Omega logo okay?). Any recommendations for fonts? I'm a complete rookie with them, but I'll have a look around for ideas <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

As for an animated title screen, I built it with that in mind but side-lined the concept for more pressing matters. I think I'll definitely pick it back up again though, because it would be awesome to see moving clouds and grasses! It would make a good first impression.

Background - You and Rory are completely right. I'm making a post after I've replied to everyone individually that will suggest some improvements, and cover what I've been working on since I got home today. I'd love your feedback if you have the time <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

Dying - I'll tweak the roots to expire after 20 seconds or so. I think that's a good idea of yours. As for the planks, I don't want them to respawn, since I don't want this to be a platformer that has floating islands and respawning objects just because it's a platformer. I'm trying to make everything feel at least somewhat grounded in reality. There are other routes to take anyway, if you mess up the high path <img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

The thorn bush and shaking screen after death thing are bugs, and I've now fixed them both. Thanks for reporting them <img src="smileys/smiley20.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

Water pool transition - A friend mentioned exactly the same thing the other day when he saw Omega. I do actually have the water sunk into a sort of ditch, with grass overhangs on the edges, but apparently they aren't clear enough by far <img src="smileys/smiley17.gif" border="0" align="middle" /> I'll improve the art there.

Enemies - right. I agree with you, and read on to see some ideas I want to implement for improving them! As for no rewards for killing them, you do get points for killing them. I hope the high score system is working <img src="smileys/smiley5.gif" border="0" align="middle" /> You can also get a medal which gives you bonus points for killing one or more of each enemy type (Hunter Medal), and a medal for killing every enemy in the level if you can hunt them down (Predator medal). As for avoiding them all being easy - there's a medal for that too called Pacifist, which is one of the highest point rewards in the game (deliberately! I love animals! But it also makes up for the points your missing out on by leaving them alive). So unless the score system is borked, you are rewarded. Try going into the options menu and turning on the Score Display for clarification. I have it set to "off" by default because I love clean UIs.

Again, thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it and will do everything I can to improve Omega with it!

Ah, remember when I just said I can't wait to try this a few days ago?

Can't believe I can - right now!

Downloading as we speak :D

EDIT: Some of my opinions,

1) Since the game play uses the keyboard, it would be good if you could navigate the menus with the keyboard as well.

2) The animation for the wolf is great!

3) The deadness and static-ness of everything but the wolf doesn't do it justice. Your animation skills are amazing, bring more things to life!

4) The parallax doesn't work well as the distance isn't reflected with color. Maybe you can make things in the distance lose focus or lose color like in reality.

5) I can tell from this you don't have very good color theory, you should paint with more lighting/color thinking in your thought process, instead of simply darkening and lightening for shades.

6) The game play as of now is still dull, you need more game mechanics, juiced up ones, like a very major feature which would spice everything up, bring the game attention, and hopefully add to the game's beautiful world ;)

Thanks for the feedback! Sorry it wasn't up to scratch, but I'll work hard to meet everyone's expectations <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

1) Do you consider this important? I could program this in for sure, but only if people really consider it necessary. I know I get annoyed when games don't allow mouse-control menus though, so it wouldn't surprise me if others are annoyed when they can't control menus with the keyboard.

2) Thanks <img src="smileys/smiley4.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

3) Right-o. Read on for how I'm going to tackle this. I'll make a final post after replying to everyone specifically, discussing suggested improvements, and this is one of them I'll cover.

4) Gotcha! Again, read on please <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />

5) Yup, I suck with colour. I grew up drawing all the time, but never experimented with painting. Sometimes I'd think "I'm going to practice painting today" - and I'd sketch something up with every intention of painting it, but then be so happy with my sketch that I'd decide not to paint it for fear of ruining it with my lack of painting experience. With digital art (ctrl-z is the best thing since sliced bread) that fear is gone, and I'm finally playing catch up. Omega is very much a learning experience for me, in many ways! Use of colour being one of them. But I expect I'll pick a lot up over the course of its development.

6) Hmmm. This is a tough one. Maybe I need to push the elemental abilities more? I plan on adding more skills for purchase with Red Motes (read the mechanics of them in the OP up top), and maybe it was a mistake making the base abilities somewhat bland in comparison to the advanced abilities. I plan on having homing fireballs, a channeled speed boost (run faster for as long as you hold down a specific key), the ability to run across water (useful for a later level based on lakes), and the ability to call upon nature to aid you - such as foxes, birds, and other critters attacking and distracting enemies for you. I also want a super move for each element, where the wolf will howl, use up a full energy bar, and permanently alter the level based on the elemental power (so fireballs raining from the sky and setting the place on fire, raining down hellfire on any on-screen enemy; a complete freeze of the level, slowing all enemies and freezing all water for easy crossing, etc). I could some more advanced abilities in for the demo, if you think that would help things?

Thanks again for the feedback <img src="smileys/smiley1.gif" border="0" align="middle" />